Sarah Smiles ([info]sarahsmiles) wrote,
@ 2008-07-17 07:46:00
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hey? wassap?
It makes me wonder where I've been, and where you've been since then,
as I've writ not a word nor read not a wit, which is really quite absurd.
I've been crawling around the holes, and alleys and lanes
of the warrens I'm wont to call life, and I've had my share
of blessings and sins, of love and moments of strife.
If feels that I've lost the words in my mouth, locked deep in side of my soul
except for these moments just after dawn when I smile and see the world whole.


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[info]artmunow
2008-07-17 02:32 pm UTC (link)
the hole in my whole is
a bin of witless words all
wandering thru those
i've been blessed by

all i know for sure are
the absurd alleys crawling
under my life and locked
in the mouths of others

some sinners accept those
moments when they feel
some one's world smile..

like a dawning calling
to share who's coming






Edited at 2008-07-17 02:33 pm UTC

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[info]sarahsmiles
2008-07-19 03:41 pm UTC (link)
you're putting words into my mouth, or is this your mouth... which would be a nasty pinch. call you or me a bin of witless words. :)

Love it anyway.

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[info]faerieariel
2008-07-17 03:53 pm UTC (link)
Stupendous informality in the original, and the re-mix is intriguing...I like both :)

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[info]sarahsmiles
2008-07-19 03:40 pm UTC (link)
yes, a wonderful response, don't you think?

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[info]ravensee
2008-07-19 03:51 pm UTC (link)
Sorry S! You posted a comment on my post, but I had re-edited and reposted the post so I lost your comment, sorrry about that.:P

Edited at 2008-07-19 03:52 pm UTC

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[info]sarahsmiles
2008-07-25 12:17 am UTC (link)
No worries. It was custom private instructions for global power and world domination that I'd arranged just for you. :)

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